URGENT 19 POINTS Bjr est ce que qqun peut me corriger ce texte, traduire ce qui est entre guillemets et me faire une ou plusieurs remarques sur le texte. Merci
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URGENT 19 POINTS Bjr est ce que qqun peut me corriger ce texte, traduire ce qui est entre guillemets et me faire une ou plusieurs remarques sur le texte. Merci d'avance.
First of all, I don’t think that there is a recipe for the success. The success is important for me because this is “primordial” for the future.
For me the definition of success is when we found a family and we get an interesting job. Make big money or to be wealthy is not necessary for success “cpt ça y contribue”.
The most important things for the success is be strong willed, optimistic and self-confident. If I fail to do something I try to stay focus on my goal and I “réessaye”.
Stand out from the others or have an outstanding life is not necessary for success. We want a normal life and make ends meet to achieve dreams.
Later in life, I would like pursue a career in science and, maybe if I’m lucky, set up my own company. Also I would like earn a living and found a family.
Finally I want try my luck to achieve success, I hope never give up my dreams and I want make efforts to make my dream come truje.
First of all, I don’t think that there is a recipe for the success. The success is important for me because this is “primordial” for the future.
For me the definition of success is when we found a family and we get an interesting job. Make big money or to be wealthy is not necessary for success “cpt ça y contribue”.
The most important things for the success is be strong willed, optimistic and self-confident. If I fail to do something I try to stay focus on my goal and I “réessaye”.
Stand out from the others or have an outstanding life is not necessary for success. We want a normal life and make ends meet to achieve dreams.
Later in life, I would like pursue a career in science and, maybe if I’m lucky, set up my own company. Also I would like earn a living and found a family.
Finally I want try my luck to achieve success, I hope never give up my dreams and I want make efforts to make my dream come truje.
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bonjour !
First of all, I don't think there's any recipe for success. Success is important to me because it's essential for my future.
To me, success means having a family and an interesting job. Making lot of money or being wealthy isn't so nessary but it may help.
The most important things are to be strong-willed, optimistic and self confident. If I fail to do something, I stay focus on my goal and I try again.
Having an outstanding life is not a priority. All I want is a normal life and achieve my dreams.
Later on, I'd like to pursue a career in science and, maybe, if I'm lucky enough, set up my own company. I would like to earn a( good) living and found a family.
I hope I'll never give up . I will do every possible efforts because I want my dreams come true
je sais que j'ai supprimé quelque bouts de ton texte, mais c'est pour éviter les répétitions. J'espère que je suis bien resté dans tes idées.
Bonne année 2016