Bonjour, pouvez-vous me corriger s'il vous plaît ? Ladies and gentleman, I am the headmistress for the school. Welcome to my innovative high school. Our motto i
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Bonjour, pouvez-vous me corriger s'il vous plaît ?
Ladies and gentleman, I am the headmistress for the school.
Welcome to my innovative high school. Our motto is :"The living know". This innovative school is to learn you behave like living dead. Last year, our school graduated two hundred and fifty students.
They are fifteen teachers to learn you how to do your makeup, walking and make noises like the living dead. These are the unorthodox teaching methods.
You should come to school with torn clothes and with a dirty effect. For the equipment your bring the makeup for example that of Halloween. If you do not come in with the uniform and equipment ask you will not accepted in school. You are allowed to sleep in schools. There is an activity proposed to learn you how to prepare your uniform. It is available on Tuesdays, throughout the afternoon. Of course you can come even if you have courses.
To conclude I show you my former students in a famous series.
Ladies and gentleman, I am the headmistress for the school.
Welcome to my innovative high school. Our motto is :"The living know". This innovative school is to learn you behave like living dead. Last year, our school graduated two hundred and fifty students.
They are fifteen teachers to learn you how to do your makeup, walking and make noises like the living dead. These are the unorthodox teaching methods.
You should come to school with torn clothes and with a dirty effect. For the equipment your bring the makeup for example that of Halloween. If you do not come in with the uniform and equipment ask you will not accepted in school. You are allowed to sleep in schools. There is an activity proposed to learn you how to prepare your uniform. It is available on Tuesdays, throughout the afternoon. Of course you can come even if you have courses.
To conclude I show you my former students in a famous series.
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1. Réponse skyforce
Ladies and gentleman, I am the headmaster of the school
Le reste c'est bon. -
2. Réponse Kaylie64Wuliuxin
Coucou ^^
Alors je trouve ton texte est très bien et tes mots sont très recherchés ^^
Cependant, j'y ai tout de même relevé quelques erreurs ^^''
Je te donne mes corrections ci-dessous :
- Ligne 1 : Ladies and gentlemen (qui signifie "Messieurs", car "gentleman" signifie "gentilhomme")
- Lignes 8-9 : For the equipment you (et non pas "your" ^^'') bring
- Lignes 9-10 : If you don't (car la forme contractée de "do not" est "don't") come in
- Ligne 10 : and the equipment asked
- Lignes 11-12 : There is an activity proposed to learn to you how to prepare you uniform.
(- Ligne 15 : To conclude I'm going to show you my former students in a famous series. -> Parce que tu annonces à ton "public" ce que tu vas faire dans quelques instants ^^)
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Voili voilou ^^
J'espère que mes corrections te seront utiles ^^
Passe une bonne soirée ^^