Bonsoir , Ece que ma phrase est correcte ? I have always had a keen interest in sport . In fact , In my lifetime, I have had the opportunity to practise diverse

Bonsoir , Ece que ma phrase est correcte ?
I have always had a keen interest in sport . In fact , In my lifetime, I have had the opportunity to practise diverse sports like tennis , dance , gymnastic, swimming ... Now , I am dedicated to circus arts , especially in aerial silk

J'ai toujours eu un grand interet pour le sport . En effet , au cours de ma vie , j'ai eu l'oppotunité de practiquer des sports divers comme le tennis , la dance , la gymnastique , la natation ... Maintenant , je me suis consacrée à l'art du cirque , , en particulier au tissue aérien

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