bonjour je dois faire une lettre de motivation avec: -start your letter explaining why you are writing -intruduce yourself briefly -explain why are you interest

bonjour je dois faire une lettre de motivation avec:
-start your letter explaining why you are writing
-intruduce yourself briefly
-explain why are you interested in the job
-highlight your experiences and skills
-thank the employer for reading your letter
-chek and rechek your cover letter for errors. Look closely for mistakes in
grammar, ponctuation and spelling
-Your letter should be brief and well-presentedPouriez vous me dire si jai fais des fautes et ou svp:
to whom it may concerm,
I'm writing to apply for the job of help wanted in a music store.
I'm 17 years old, I'm in the school ...... I'm interested in this job
because I think you can help me to get more experiences about this job, and
this job would be enriching and interesting for me.
I had sometimes work in a shop over the last holiday for two months. Since
I am ten years old I like music and il love listening them. I'm very
friendly with the customers, I'm very enthusiastic when I dos ome jobs, I
can come all the time. I had never work in a music store but I like learn a
lot of things.
Thank tou very much for your time and attention.
Sincerely,
merci davance