Re bonjour, j'ai changé quelques trucs pouvez vous me dire si il n'y a plus de fautes svp ? Merci, bonne soirée I'm crazy about music! Every day, I wake up with
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Re bonjour, j'ai changé quelques trucs pouvez vous me dire si il n'y a plus
de fautes svp ? Merci, bonne soirée
I'm crazy about music! Every day, I wake up with music, I fall asleep with
music, I make everything with music!The chocolate is my weakness, I like especially the milk chocolate. There
is always a tablet in my fridge.I like the winter : it is my favorite season, I enjoy skiing in the
mountains of Vosges, that's splendid !The riding is my biggest passion, I make it since I am 8 years old. I go
out in competition of C.S.O with two incredible horses.
de fautes svp ? Merci, bonne soirée
I'm crazy about music! Every day, I wake up with music, I fall asleep with
music, I make everything with music!The chocolate is my weakness, I like especially the milk chocolate. There
is always a tablet in my fridge.I like the winter : it is my favorite season, I enjoy skiing in the
mountains of Vosges, that's splendid !The riding is my biggest passion, I make it since I am 8 years old. I go
out in competition of C.S.O with two incredible horses.
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Oui, c'est bien ; je n'ai presque rien corrigé, voilà ce que mettraisI'm crazy about music! Every day, I wake up with music, I fall asleep with
music, I make everything with music!
Chocolate is my weakness, I like especially milk chocolate. There is always a tablet in my fridge.
Winter is my favorite season, I enjoy skiing in the mountains of Vosges. It is wonderful !
Riding is my biggest passion. I ride since I am 8 years old. I take part in C.S.O competitions with two incredible horses.