Bonjour, Je dois rédiger une lettre à un grand journal anglais, sur l’utilité de sites internet qui diffusent des informations confidentielles, tels Wikileaks.
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Bonjour,
Je dois rédiger une lettre à un grand journal anglais, sur l’utilité de sites internet qui diffusent des informations confidentielles, tels Wikileaks.
Voici quelques parties de ma lettre dont je ne suis pas sûre de l’orthographe.
Moreover, through this debate, we might ask what the real intentions of these sites are: is to provide useful information to the public interest, or create buzz, and consequently to operate the business information? These "news leaks" may they not only supply the necessary information to addict’s conspiracy theory?
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So, these sites are a useful information tool, even necessary, which informs. However, this information function should not harm the public interest. Indeed, such sites should not disclose information likely to create international tensions, which are not in the public interest.
Merci pour la correction !
Je dois rédiger une lettre à un grand journal anglais, sur l’utilité de sites internet qui diffusent des informations confidentielles, tels Wikileaks.
Voici quelques parties de ma lettre dont je ne suis pas sûre de l’orthographe.
Moreover, through this debate, we might ask what the real intentions of these sites are: is to provide useful information to the public interest, or create buzz, and consequently to operate the business information? These "news leaks" may they not only supply the necessary information to addict’s conspiracy theory?
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So, these sites are a useful information tool, even necessary, which informs. However, this information function should not harm the public interest. Indeed, such sites should not disclose information likely to create international tensions, which are not in the public interest.
Merci pour la correction !
2 Réponse
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1. Réponse akamatatsu
Eh beh!Tu es forte en anglais,aucune faute,Bien. -
2. Réponse med1ali3
aucune faute ta bien redige le lettre