Coucou ! Voici mon texte. Si quelqu'un pouvait le corriger, ça serait sympa :) When I saw our new home for the first time, I couldn't believe my eyes.It was a b

Coucou !

Voici mon texte. Si quelqu'un pouvait le corriger, ça serait sympa :)

When I saw our new home for the first time, I couldn't believe my eyes.It was a big house with a huge garden at the edge of a lake. In the garden
there was a lot of plants and a fountain. From the outside the house seemed
perfect. When I pushed the front door, I held my breath. I saw a gigantic
living-room, white and bright.I climbed up the stairs and discovered my bedroom. I didn't know what to
say, she was magnificent !Blue, with a big bed with a lot of pillows.This house was perfect, a house made especially for me. I realized my dream.

merci davance