Bonjour tout le monde ! Kathy and Peter were sleeping in a Castle for their honey moon. They are in their bathroom. “My Dear, can you get my bag please‘‘she ask
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Bonjour tout le monde !
Kathy and Peter were sleeping in a Castle for their honey moon. They are in
their bathroom.
“My Dear, can you get my bag please‘‘she asked.
During Peter was finding the Kathy bag, she went to the Kitchen to take a
knife and she went back to the bathroom.
“I have found it! ‘‘He shouted .Peter was brushing his teeth. When he
finished, he drank water and suddenly he fell because of poison which Kathy
put in our glass.
Few hours later, Peter was tied up in the room. Kathy was waiting Peter
wake up, next she yelled that Peter give the code of his safe but he
refused because there was all money inside. Kathy put in an enormous angry
and she threaten him with the knife. Peter didn’t understand anything’s
because he loved Kathy and she had many gift, jewelry or clothes… but she
had not always the famous code. Kathy went in Kitchen to drank, it was 11
pm and during this time, peter who was our phone in front of him, he told
the police and wait that arrive.
“Give me this code‘‘she shriek and peter kept the silence…
The police arrived in one hours later and Kathy was stop and driven in
prison for assassination attempt and attempt to poison.
THE END
est que quelqu'un pourrait me corriger mon texte?
merci bcp :)
Kathy and Peter were sleeping in a Castle for their honey moon. They are in
their bathroom.
“My Dear, can you get my bag please‘‘she asked.
During Peter was finding the Kathy bag, she went to the Kitchen to take a
knife and she went back to the bathroom.
“I have found it! ‘‘He shouted .Peter was brushing his teeth. When he
finished, he drank water and suddenly he fell because of poison which Kathy
put in our glass.
Few hours later, Peter was tied up in the room. Kathy was waiting Peter
wake up, next she yelled that Peter give the code of his safe but he
refused because there was all money inside. Kathy put in an enormous angry
and she threaten him with the knife. Peter didn’t understand anything’s
because he loved Kathy and she had many gift, jewelry or clothes… but she
had not always the famous code. Kathy went in Kitchen to drank, it was 11
pm and during this time, peter who was our phone in front of him, he told
the police and wait that arrive.
“Give me this code‘‘she shriek and peter kept the silence…
The police arrived in one hours later and Kathy was stop and driven in
prison for assassination attempt and attempt to poison.
THE END
est que quelqu'un pourrait me corriger mon texte?
merci bcp :)
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Kathy and Peter were staying in a Castle for their honeymoon.
Once in their bathroom, Kathy put some powder in Peter’s tooth glass.
“My Dear, can you get my bag please ? ‘‘she asked.
While Peter was looking for her bag, Kathy went to the kitchen ; she took a knife and went back to the bathroom. “I have found it! " shouted Peter; then he began to brush his teeth . When he finished, he drank the water from his glass and suddenly he fell because of the poison that Kathy had put inside.
A few hours later,Peter woke and found himself tied up in the room.
Kathy was waiting ; as soon as Peter opened his eyes she yelled : “give me the code of your safe ! ” As he refused , she threatened him with the knife.
Peter didn’t understand because he loved Kathy and she had received so many gifts, jewelry or clothes… But she wanted the money and did not have the code .
Peter had noticed that there was a phone in front of him ; he managed to loosen his bonds and closed his eyes again, as if he was sleeping.
At 11 pm Kathy went to the Kitchen to drink; Peter picked the phone and called the police ; they told him that they were coming immediately .So when Kathy came back and shrieked “Give me this code‘‘ ; Peter kept silent…
The police arrived very quickly .Kathy was arrested and put in
prison for attempted murder and attempted poisoning